1995-1996 Harry Singer Foundation National Essay Contest
Responsibility Who Has It And Who Doesn't
And What That Means For The Nation

Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana
Teachers : James Zimmerman / Sheila Mayeaux
1st Jaime
Tassino
2nd Yana Lukina
3rd Crystal
Jeansonne
3rd Monica LaBorde
America: The Finger-Pointing Capital of the World
"In the 1700's, our forefathers had a vision for America. To them, America meant freedom, democracy, and free speech. It was a place where people could start new lives, and families could prosper and thrive in a bountiful new land for generations to come. However, our forefather's vision for America can be viewed as idealistic. They all wanted freedom to do as they pleased. A constitution was written that stressed individual liberty and the regulation of commerce---period. The framers of the Constitution apparently never thought they would have to tell people to be good to one another.
So, how did America become the Finger-Pointing Capital of the World?
[America] used to make us think of success - names such as Andrew Carnagie, Fredrick Douglass, and Harry Truman---the man who kept a sign on his desk that read: 'The Buck Stops Here'.
Not any more. Now, we have got the Menendez brothers, Stella Lieback and Bryan Fortay.
America the land of the free: guilt free, fault free, and responsibility free. Blame you, blame them, blame everyone, but don't blame me. I am just a victim.
Among all the victims, the lawsuits and the shirking, we cannot help wondering:
Whatever happened to personal responsibility? The evaporation of personal responsibility
is the result of the American dream gone kablooie. The country founded of the ideal of
individual liberty, they say, has reached the point where all those individual freedoms
outweigh the welfare of society as a whole. Many citizens in the United States are
obsessed with self-interests, that is, getting the best deal for themselves in all
matters, both financial and otherwise. Fred Guy says, 'I think we are going kind of nuts
right now.'
At the core of pessimism is an increasingly frantic fear among Americans that the country
is suffering a moral and spiritual decline. The search for values has always threaded
through American life. From the battle against slavery to the battle against alcohol,
Americans have used politics to further their deepest moral and spiritual yearnings. The
question now is whether politicians will look for common ground, a synthesis combining the
great themes in American values: personal responsibility, individualism and community,
freedom and sacrifice. If not, the cultural warfare will only get worse.
Also in America, states are treating Mom and Dad as criminals if their children are bad. Parents are increasingly being held liable, sometimes even in a criminal sense, for the bad behavior of their children, The new laws are born in frustration as states fear their police and schools are losing a battle to control teen violence, drug-use, truancy, and pregnancy. There is little evidence to suggest that parental-liability laws will work to curb teenage sociopathy. The truth is that no one is sure how to control teen violence,truancy and pregnancies.
Who is fed up with the behavior of many Americans today?
Lots of people are. Here are some examples of how states are cracking down and using anti-parent laws:
Many Americans today feel mired in a deep cultural recession and are struggling to escape by restoring old-fashioned values to a central place in their lives. It is a Woodstock turned on its head 25 years later, a counter-revolution that esteems prayer over pot, self-discipline over self-indulgence, family-love over free-love.
In the fall of 1994, Republicans passed what they called 'The Contract With America'. It pledged major changes in the civil-justice system aimed at curbing the number of lawsuits and the size of damage awards. The House of Representatives passed three pieces of legislation that would cap some jury verdicts, deter some court actions and force some losing litigants to pay the legal fees of their opponents. Most important, Congress set national limits on awards for punitive and medical-malpractice damages. 'This represents the first significant regulation of lawsuits and lawyers from the perspective of non-lawyers.' says Representative Christopher Cox of California.
Americans need to start accepting their responsibilities. If they do something wrong, they should take the blame for it and stop pointing fingers at everyone else.
The best solution dealing with the problems in America today is discussion and education, although, it could take a generation for our society to evolve to the point where violence is so passe' that the media can no longer use it to attain higher ratings.
Americans today need to become more active in finding solutions for the many problems in the country. America needs to start a new crusade for [future] generations. As a famous quote by Pueblo Casseles says, 'We ought to think that we are one of the leaves of a tree, and the tree is all humanity. We cannot live without the others, without the tree.'
Togetherness is the key to a better America. If family members can start reuniting and start working together, there is a chance for our country to redeem itself and get back on top. Americans need to emphasize more 'good versus evil' instead of race against race. To quote Abraham Lincoln, 'Determine that the thing can and shall be done, and then we shall find the way.'
We all know what needs to be done so our country will once again be what our
forefathers once envisioned. By working together hand-in-hand we can make a brighter
tomorrow."
Jaime L. Tassin, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana
"If America wants a good future, responsibility must be taught and demonstrated.
This is the only way. Tomorrow begins with today."
Monica LaBorde, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana
"The growth in the world's population calls for decisive action by partnerships
formed between government, business, non-governmental and non-profit. . .organizations,
aimed at channelling resources towards people growing up in the 1990's. Only then will all
those who make it through their first crucial years. . .hope to flourish. . .leaving in
their place a better legacy for those who come after them."
Dan Lemoine, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Lousiana
"Professors of philosophy and ethics have some theories. The country founded on
the ideal of individual liberty has reached the point where all those individual freedoms
outweigh the welfare of society as a whole."
Yana Lukina, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana
". . .juvenile crime should be treated as regular crime and it will cut down on
the juvenile crime rate."
Joshua Manuel, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Lousiana
"Companies do have responsibility to the consumer, but where should the line be
drawn? Michael Thorp was born mentally retarded and physically deformed. His mother, while
pregnant for Michael, drank half a fifth of liquor everyday, causing Michael's problems.
Is it the distilleries fault Mike's mother drank the liquor? She thought it was. She sued
the J.B. Beam Distillery for willful misconduct. In Many people's eyes, this action was
uncalled for. Cases like this one have made many companies weary of liability. In some
cases, such as Jim Hoscheits's, the company was at fault. Jim's story is one of a
company's pure neglect to safety. Jim was a promising junior high school football player.
While working on a forage blower, Jim's arms were traumatically amputated. A forage blower
is a farming machine that throws grain up into a silo. Jim's arms were caught in the PTO
of the machine. The company neglected to put a two dollar safety guard on the machine. The
guard in question was and is use in European farms automatically. Here were two
dramatically different cases. In one a consumer abused a product, suffered for it, and
tried to seek compensation from the company. In the other, a young boy was severely
injured because of a company's neglect to safety."
Heath McWilliams, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana
"Forty-one percent of teens are still living at home with mom and dad after they
finish high school."
Julie Mire, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana
"Today's kids are desensitized to violence as never before. Surrounded by gunfire
and stuffed with media images of Rambos who kill at will. For Many inner-city youngsters,
poverty and hopelessness yield a 'what the hell' attitude that provides the backdrop for
gunplay. . . .the [easy] availability of guns has turned record numbers of everyday
encounters into deadly ones, but the damage doesn't end when the bullets stop flying. . .
.In addition, a distressingly large number of children actually witness violent crimes. An
American Psychological Association report cites a study of first and second graders in
Washington, D.C., in which 45 percent said they had witnessed a mugging, 31 percent said
they had witnessed shooting, and 39 percent said they had seen dead bodies. Although
research on children and violence is a relatively new phenomenon, psychiatrist Carl Bell
identified some primary circumstances of incidents of violence. 'The majority are
interpersonal altercations between family, friends, acquaintances,' said Dr. Bell,
executive director of Community Mental Health Council in Chicago, 'More than half of the
murders are people who know one another, so a lot of the violence children are witnessing
is of that type.' Whatever the causes, the effects of violence on children can be intense.
'They are always in a low level state of hypervigilance,' said Bruce Perry, a psychiatrist
at Baylor University in Houston, Texas, 'Imagine what it would be like trying to
concentrate in school, when every little noise outside makes you jump. I've had kids tell
me they wake in the morning and they cry because they have to leave the house, and they're
afraid they are going to get hurt on the way to school.' Behind the rash of violence is a
startling shift in adolescent attitudes. Suddenly, respect for life has ebbed sharply
among teenagers. Twenty percent of the suburban high schoolers surveyed by Tulane
researchers Joseph Sheley and M. Swayne Smith endorsed shooting someone 'who has stolen
something from you'. Concluded the researchers: 'One is struck less by the armament than
by the evident willingness to pull the trigger. '. . .When they believe the world is a
dangerous place, many children take the offensive,' says Carolyn Newberger of Boston
Children's Hospital. In suburban Jefferson Parish, La., where 21 percent of high schoolers
say they have carried a gun in the past year, 73 percent said they did so for protection.
Experts point to several sources of this troubling new code of conduct. One is the
hopelessness of poverty. Often intensified by discrimination, it lays 'a foundation of
anger, discontent and violence,' says the American Psychological Association in a recent
report. Then there's the fraying of the fabric of the family. About a third of all
American babies are born to unwed mothers. Broken homes and two-income families leave an
estimated 1 in 5 students home alone after school. Too often, such statistics translate
into neglect, abuse and truobled kids: Fully 70 percent of juvenile court cases involve
children from single-parent families."
Grant Mury, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana
"Today seriously the real solution is one that will probably need a drastic
situation to get congress to really consider it. The solution would be to rewrite the
constitution and leave out the right to bear arms. Then all factories that produce guns
should become factories for the military and the police would have to be given the right
to search houses in order to find guns. Sadly this will most likely never happen."
John Rabalais, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana
"Long ago our grandparents were [afraid] of their own parents, and [the] laws and
rules of society made them the responsible, mature people that they are today. Society
seemed to be a respectable organization of people, unlike today with its persuasive,
sophisticated appearance, but immoralized, untrustworthy interior. . . .[Today] everyone
wants to enjoy our society, but no one wants to [work hard. A work ethic] takes
responsibility, and that's where we are lacking."
Cherie Soldani, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana
"America is a country that was built by stong men and women. They based their
decisions on the ideas of previous leaders. The American forefathers planned on their
country standing for a long time. When we think of all the hard work our ancestors had to
do to win us our freedom, we might be amazed at how little effort it took to get the
country to the point it's at. The founders of America instilled morals and values in their
children, and they wrote some of those morals into their laws. It was their morals which
made them realize something was wrong with Britian's treatment to the colonies and made
them fight for their freedom. It seems that in the present times we have began to over
look some of the things our ancestors believe in. We are not so concerned with morals as
we are with getting ahead in life. Americans today focus on themselves and what they can
gain."
Jennifer Vosielle, Avoyelles High School, Moreauville, Louisiana