Hyndman High School
Hyndman, Pennsylvania
Teacher: Janet Phillips

The Role of Personal Responsibility in
Improving
The Quality of Life in Our Communities Today
By Shana Shoemaker
Grade:
11
I think that my personal role of
improving the quality of life in our communities is based upon many things. My community
is small and not a "high crime rated" area. Many times through out my life, I
have been asked what I could do to make my community a better place. I always think about
the problems that I couldnt change, such as taxes, pollution, and high unemployment
rates. I realize that all these problems are in some way related to many other communities
so that is why I try and resolve the problems that I can handle without having to be an
adult or an official.
Obstacles in our community can be
overcome if we just pay more attention to them. Most people in my community have to travel
out of town and in many cases out of state just to get to work every morning. Without
factories or big businesses in our town, people are forced to look elsewhere. There is a
lot of vandalism in our community also. Over the past few years many incidents have
occurred: windows have been broken out of small shops and even our town pharmacy, bottles
have been broken on the road, and our soda machines have been vandalized.
Our town has no public
transportation, with the exception of school busses. There is no help for the elderly,
handicapped, or teenagers who need to go from place to place safely. My community also has
no police force or any other form of public protection. The nearest police station is more
than twenty minutes away. This may cause many
problems because we cannot get help fast enough.
Our society is affected by these
problems every day. Traveling out of state to get to work every morning can cause many
problems for the people who need to spend gas money. Whenever there is a any type of
vandalism in our town, the parents and students always blame it on the fact that there is
nowhere for kids to go to stay out of trouble. I think that investing in an arcade or
recreational center for kids to keep them off the streets would be well worth the time and
money. Without a public transportation system many people will be left with limited means
of transportation.This could lead to many car thefts. We have no police protection only
causes problems for many people. The fact that there is no police around here causes
people to drive faster, road hunt, drink and drive, hang on the street corner, and get
involved in domestic disputes.
Our children may be affected by the
problems that we have around our community. Why
would we want anything bad to continue knowing that our children and possibly grand
children will have to put up with the exact same thing? I realize that not all the
problems will be fixed right away, but at least we can get started as soon as possible.
Since there are only a few jobs around here now, I predict that many people will move just
to be closer to their jobs. If this happens,
our little town, as we know it, will soon become deserted. Without jobs in the area, many
people may turn to welfare to solve their problems. The only point that Im trying to
make is there will be more problems in the future unless the teenagers of todays
society can come together. If many teenagers
contribute to their community, then it is just another step in improving the quality of
life around the world, as well as their home
town.
In conclusion, I think that I can
help my community and start that cycle of improvement. The low employment rate can be
helped just by going to the town council or mayor and asking for help. By building bigger
building and providing jobs, out community could become a better place. In my town there is a lot of vandalism and teen
pregnancy. I think that setting up things for teens and their friends to do after school
can really help. In my own personal experience, I think that if I would get involved in
school sports, it would be easier to stay out of certain dilemmas. The fact that we have
no public transportation can be helped but not completely solved. Many people can
volunteer to deliver medication, groceries, and other supplies to the people who need it.
If a lack of public protection is an issue, then I can start night watches with friends
around my community. I dont think that in my town that would be necessary, but
people can still look out for your neighbors when they're away or post restricted area
signs to help keep teenagers out. Whatever I do to help my community may not be
recognized, but will help out in a positive way.
REQUIRED READING QUESTIONS
Q1-
The society invests in marriage by providing money to help pay for marriage
counselors. The society invests in Manus by
providing money to the financiers who in turn invest that money into marriages.
Q2-
In the result of my interviews, four people whos marriages ranged from
17,8,12,and 17 years said that there advice to a long healthy relationship would be
communication. Another four people said that
they believed trust was the answer to a long relationship.
Their marriages were anywhere from 35 years to 15 years, and 9 to 24 years. The last bit of people I interviewed was married
for 3 years and 21 years. These people said
that the key to a good marriage would be commitment. Obviously all these things are needed
to have a healthy and happy relationship.
Q3-
Our collective goal should be spending more time trying to understand what is going
on as far as growth and expansion in our world as well as the effects of that these
changes may cause. We also need to look for
better alternatives.
Q4-
The most obvious goal for my local community should be more recognition and
support for our
children. I think that by paying more
attention to the needs of todays
youth, many benefits may arise. If
children are treated decent, they treat others
decent. By treating others decent a positive change will
occur in the way that
people treat other people.
Q5-
The excerpts from Tomorrows Child are not what I would call
realistic. The idea of giving a child a doll
in place of a mother is not humane, nor is it logical thinking. Is a doll going to save a child's life if the
child is choking or drowning? I do not think
that a doll would be capable of such things. A
child would absorb many aspects of a so called doll.
Good or bad many functions of a doll could cause a lack of understanding
and communication for a child.
Q6-
Kathleen Sullivan thinks that lawyers are useful in the world today. She said that
lawyers settle many cases out of court and help people out by anticipating future
conflict. Kathleen Sullivan also says that
lawyers are particularly helpful in the United States and its democracy. Lawyers are bringing lawsuits against states for
providing legal aid to people who have little or almost no money, but still in need of
help.
Q7-
If people want to sue other people over what I like to call petty differences, then
they need to understand that the world wasnt made just for them. I read in a magazine about a woman suing McDonalds
for making the coffee too hot. The woman
purchased a cup of coffee at McDonalds, and went to pull out when her coffee spilled all
over her burning her. The woman sued The
McDonalds company for thousands of dollars in damage.
I think that this action was not thought out or very constructive. I think that if
more people learn to complain less about little things and start complaining about more
important issues like child care, education, and drug-use then the US would be in a better
state of understanding.
Q8-
The retirement of baby boomers can ause a great number of available jobs for our
Generation Xers. By starting up there
own businesses they will allow many more jobs to open
up. If the people of my time will step up and take these jobs there will be an increase
for the needed help of elderly care facilities. Many
people who retire within the next year could
cause a major change in the retirement programs.
Q9-
These plans to help fund poverty may cause more problems for the U.S. If the people of the United States of America
wont pay higher taxes for this funding then who will? The U.S. is supposed to be a
rich country so who could blame countries in need for coming to us. If Americans have to pay for the needs of other
people outside of there country this could cause a
major uproar in the citizens of the U.S. If we continue to pay for these tactics then we
could lose communication with a more productive country if that country dislikes the
country that we are trying to help. I personally think that a good president should put
the needs of his own country first. If we need to help out another country that is fine as
long as the stability of our Country remains strong.
Q10-
Truett Cathy and Tom Lewis both have a big dream.
I think that they both worked hard for a really long time to accomplish there
goals. They both think that children should
be loved and under the same roof as there parents.